~ Wild ponies
dark as old iron cloud shadows chase the herdflowing down the hills{I know frequently 'ing' shouldn't be in a Haiku, but I had to, y'know? }~ The Dancing Muse ~Proud member & moderator at Writer...
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What a cool image, Claire!I can see them running, flowing into the landscape...(I don't think "ing" is against ku rules...a few folksfrown on it, that's all!)This is just lovely! Lary
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never heard about the "ing" thing. Anything we write in English technically aren't haiku anyway, since the true form can only be created in Japanese onji, for which we have no equivalent. So what do...
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I get a vivid image from this, Qryos. I don't know anything about Haiku, so will stay out of that discussion. Jan or you can view my personal poetry webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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Q,Amazing how one well chosen word can bring so much to a poem! iron, not only colours the cloud shadows, it lends itself in strength and personification. A very powerful image!Wanda
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